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-Inspired by historical burial garments and contemporary fashion design, the project culminated in a burial gown for women, incorporating elements from early 20th-century English shrouds and Balenciaga wedding dresses. The gown design emphasized simplicity, elegance, and ease of dressing the deceased. The garment comprised multiple layers: a cotton gown with lace detailing, naturally dyed silk gloves, and a top layer made from the rose-based bio-material. 
+Inspired by historical burial garments and contemporary fashion design, the project culminated in a burial gown for women, incorporating elements from early 20th-century English shrouds and Balenciaga wedding dresses. The gown design emphasized simplicity, elegance, and ease of dressing the deceased. 
 
 ## **FABRICATION**
 
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 ## **PHOTOSHOOT** 
 
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+The garment comprised multiple layers: a cotton gown with lace detailing, naturally dyed silk gloves, and a top layer made from the roses and alginate-based bio-material. 
+
 ### **UNDERGARMENT** 
 
 #### **SHROUD** 
 
+This undergarment has intricate lacing details along the sleeves and shoulders, which allow the sleeves to be detachable. This feature not only adds to the garment's aesthetic appeal but also provides functionality by making it easier to dress the deceased. 
+
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+When the laces are untied, the garment can be laid completely flat on a table, simplifying the dressing process.
+
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 #### **GLOVES** 
 
+The silk gloves took the gentle green colours from rose leaves.  
+
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 #### **FEET COVERS** 
 
+A pair of feet covers with lacing details, ensuring a respectful and dignified preparation for burial.
+
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 ### **DRESS**