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 ## Motivation
 
-After doing everything mannually during my entire school years, I would like to gain some knowledge about how to make designs using digital softwares and get familiar with the machines in the fablab. I am also interested in bio materials as I believe they are the solution towards overconsuption of fashion apparel.
+I love architecture. Good architectural buildings are pleasant to look at. As a fashion designer I always look for inspirations from architecture. My brain is naturally drawn to shapes and structures. And I think architecture leads me to this program :)
 
+It's interesting that, when you enter a book store, there are usually 10 books about famous architects/architecture firms and 20 books about building for change and green architecture/how houses can save the world. On the other hand, there are usually 10 books about fashion history and 10 other books about the greatest designers in the past. 
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+Everyone in the fashion industry is talking about change. I am one of them. But I would like to start by looking towards the future. 
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+Through architecture, I learned what the designers and scientists are working on to help the environment, and the term Bio Design came to me. I woudld like to try out bio materials at Fabricacademy as I believe they can be a great solution towards overconsuption of fashion apparel. And I also see the program as a great opportunity to work with people from other disciplines. After doing everything mannually during my entire school years with the focus only on fashion, I would like to open up my mind, gain some knowledge about how to make designs using digital softwares and get familiar with the machines in the fablab.