From 960765f8adbac798c13dd400735e6dee8b784ecf Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Jiawen Gong <jiawengong1112@gmail.com>
Date: Thu, 6 Jun 2024 14:20:45 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] Update file 01designprocess.md

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 ## **SUSTAINABLE BURIAL SOLUTIONS**
 
-While burying individuals in their own clothes can honor their personal identity, it also necessitates a careful consideration of the environmental impact of synthetic fibers. Promoting the use of biodegradable, natural fibers in burial practices can mitigate these adverse effects and contribute to more sustainable funeral traditions.
+It is necessary to carefully consider the environmental impact of synthetic fibers. Promoting the use of biodegradable, natural fibers in burial practices can mitigate these adverse effects and contribute to more sustainable funeral traditions.
 
 ### **BURIAL GARMENTS**
 
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