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 ## **SUSTAINABLE BURIAL SOLUTIONS**
 
-While burying individuals in their own clothes can honor their personal identity, it also necessitates a careful consideration of the environmental impact of synthetic fibers. Promoting the use of biodegradable, natural fibers in burial practices can mitigate these adverse effects and contribute to more sustainable funeral traditions.
+It is necessary to carefully consider the environmental impact of synthetic fibers. Promoting the use of biodegradable, natural fibers in burial practices can mitigate these adverse effects and contribute to more sustainable funeral traditions.
 
 ### **BURIAL GARMENTS**