From 160e3f1b766a4e21171ab124827a1165850511bb Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Jiawen Gong <jiawengong1112@gmail.com>
Date: Thu, 6 Jun 2024 20:31:25 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] Update file 01designprocess.md

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 ## **SOIL CHROMATOGRAPHY**
 
-To prove the positive impact of flowers on soil health, I performed a test known as soil chromatography. Soil chromatography is an analytical technique used to separate and identify the different components in a soil sample. It is based on the principle that different substances will move at different rates when dissolved in a solvent and passed through a medium. It can provide visual indicators of soil health by revealing the distribution and concentration of organic and inorganic substances within the soil. 
+To prove the positive impact of flowers on soil health, I performed a test known as soil chromatography. Soil chromatography is an analytical technique used to separate and identify the different components in a soil sample. It is based on the principle that different substances will move at different rates when dissolved in a solvent and passed through a medium. 
 
 ![PROCESS](../images/process/P4.jpg){ width=1000 }
 
-The graphs above demonstrate how rose petals and rose leaves nourish the soil: 
+Soil chromatography can provide visual indicators of soil health by revealing the distribution and concentration of organic and inorganic substances within the soil. The graphs above demonstrate how rose petals and rose leaves nourish the soil in various ways: 
 
 1. Diverse and Well-Distributed Bands: The presence of multiple distinct bands can suggest a balanced and nutrient-rich soil.
 
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