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From: Loes <l.bogers@hva.nl>
Date: Tue, 14 Apr 2020 15:28:52 +0200
Subject: [PATCH] Update final-project.md

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 #Archiving New Naturals
 
-##Scaffolding a context-aware global material commons: what's in *your* local archive?
+##towards a context-aware global material commons: what's in *your* local archive?
 
 ![](../images/presentation-4.jpg)*Material samples, Loes Bogers, 2020*
 
-**The goal of this project was to explore and develop simple methods for open archiving of socalled "new naturals"\*....**
+**The goal of this project was to explore and develop simple methods for open archiving of socalled "new naturals"\*. The outcomes are developed to work toward a collaborative, global - but context-aware - material archive....**
 
-- that is not only ecologically, but also historically, culturally, geographically aware
-- that can extend material activism beyond bioplastics
-- that promotes an open-source attitude to the development of design materials, and credits the work done by others before you
-- that acknowledges all those practical questions: from buying the right kind of ingredient, all the way to tips and tricks for that challenging phase of controlled drying and curing materials to its "final" form.
-- that is explained in layman's terms, demystifying ingredients and processes without oversimplifying them
-- imaging collaborative open archiving that can facilitate critique, contestations, suggestions, updates and reviews from peers
+- that is not only ecologically, but also historically, culturally, geographically aware;
+- that can extend material activism beyond bioplastics;
+- that promotes an open-source attitude to the development of design materials, and credits the work done by others before you;
+- that acknowledges all those practical questions: from buying the right kind of ingredient, all the way to tips and tricks for that challenging phase of controlled drying and curing materials to its "final" form;
+- that is explained in layman's terms, demystifying ingredients and processes without oversimplifying them;
+- imaging collaborative open archiving that can facilitate critique, contestations, suggestions, updates and reviews from peers;
 - offering a package that allows novices to learn, and educators to get started in a systematic way...
 - ... and encourages experienced material designers and "alchemists" to continue asking the hard critical questions regarding sustainability and share those considerations with each recipe or ingredient.
 
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