Molding and Casting
• Reviewed the safety data sheets for each of your molding and casting materials, then made and compared test casts with each of them X
• Shown how you made your mould and cast the parts
• Described problems and how you fixed them X
• Included your design files and ‘hero shot’ photos of the mould and the final object X
You haven’t mentioned simulation in the text and your image of simulation is actually an image of paths.
Mention that the material selected in Modela was Milling wax and it has recommended setting for that material selected automatically.
From your design it seems that the problem with the filling hole was that it was on the lower level than the surface, which means that you cannot actually fill your mold to top without plugging it.
Explain the molding and casting part with words as well, because from the images you cannot tell why each step is made and how.
Move the milling images to correct position
It wouldn’t hurt the readability to divide the images in the milling explanation in a few smaller groups, where steps could be more easily followed with text and images.